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Thursday, December 4, 2008

Poverty- the vicious cycle!

It was a shabby little hut where he opened his eyes,
The innocent baby and his innocent cries.

The cries foretelling his miserable fate,
The fate, which was to be his lifetime mate.

His father- a poor hardworking man,
Was killed in a dispute with a nearby clan.

The dispute being of trivial nature,
Never brought into notice, the poor man's murder.

Thus, came into this world, an unfortunate soul,
Unaware of what was for him in store.

His mother too weak to earn some bread,
The boy was, therefore, seldom fed.

With little to eat and no fun at all,
He started to grow a little tall.

When he was but a little boy of eight,
In vain, he would, for good days wait.

The good days never came his way,
But destiny took his mother away.

Oh! how the poor innocent soul cried,
Wondering why every joy, was he denied.

Without anyone to love and caress,
The boy's life was one of agony and distress.

The hut was the same, and so was the boy,
He laboured hard, his life devoid of any joy.

Labouring hard, he grew into a young man,
He would then, with hope for good days, plan.

He married a girl whose life was the same as his,
Determined to share sorrows, and turn them into bliss.

They started their journey with love, together,
They vowed to stay happy forever.

Though money was scanty, and meals rare,
They thought their life was pretty fair.

The cruel fate again came to strike,
The young man was hit, by a rashly driven bike.

He was disabled for the rest of his life,
And left in misery, his poor young wife.

Being forced to earn bread for them both,
She knocked every door to sell some cloth.

Her health kept failing, but the stove was kept alive,
Inside her, she was nurturing, another life.

The young man seemed to be nearing his demise,
From his sickly bed, he was unable to rise.

The money was scantier, the meals rarer,
The only option left was an earnest prayer.

The answers to their prayers never came,
They had no idea that who was to blame.

The night was getting darker,
The future looked even harder.

It was the same shabby little hut, where he opened his eyes,
The young man's baby and his innocent cries...............

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

that was stunning !! circle of live....

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Anonymous said...

this was tooo good. I loved it!

gone! said...

Deserves a WOW! Defines the fate of a poor person. Indeed sad!

Eraj said...

thanks to all u ppl....

ankitminglani said...

heyy nice post .... :D :D it remembered me of something what i wrote about .. you can say so like my first n last poem .. when i was too small :D

http://ankitminglani.blogspot.com/2007/01/only-poem.html




God bless:)

~~Golden Vulture~~

Unknown said...

Amazing work!

Unknown said...

Oh it was sad Eishal....
really sad...
it is so true but if I would have wrote it I would bring something hopeful in to it... u ended it tooo brutally... :(
but the composition was very good indeed...

Eraj said...

Well...Afaque....if had ended it with hope...it would hv been unrealistic....
as far as i hv seen...poor people die poor....
its brutal...but real...
sad indeed

thnx foh dropping by

Sidra Ch. said...

quite touching. :)